Lol so true what is it with these saiyan guys and their pride Then again Ai is quite stubborn even though she's only half saiyan That's only when men call her weak or call girls weak in general though lol Whatever men can do girls can do better muhaha!
lawl thank you don't worry i fixed the mistakes..and i forgot to fix the I aahh damn it ..Kato is ~KnightShadow01's oc he's actuall Lady's apprentice annnd in real life ~KnightShadow01 is my apprentice
You may want to consider writing 'tournament' with a capital 'T' seeing as it's the name of something important. Correction: 'Tournament'
When finishing a sentence, there always needs to be a space after the punctuation mark. Corrections: "...today. Now...", "...contestants. The..." and "...Turles. Remember..."
The phrase: "The fight will be between Kato verses Turles" doesn't make much sense to me. I would recommend: "The fight will be Kato verses Turles" or "The fight will be between Kato and Turles." This is only a suggestion.
"...the rules if anyone" Correction: "...the rules are: if anyone..."
"...falls down from the ring.get's killed..." Correction: "...falls from the ring, gets killed..."
The phrase: "...killed or KO the opponent win." doesn't make much sense to me. I would recommend: "...killed or there is a KO then their opponent will win!" This is a very strong suggestion.
If my corrections are satisfactory, would you like me to continue?
first round yay! Go Kato ... what's Turles holding in his right hand? Is this a fruit from Tree of Might? Hey, that's cheating this page looks absolutely fantastic ___ I'm so excited (guess I said that before... who cares ) oh, I just can't wait when Leila will be fighting
well, I hope that Kato will win even if Turles eat that fruit... I know, I know... chosen random ... YES! I'm really excited coz I think it was really a great idea with the Tournament I'm working now on Leila's SSJ form but I got stucked... now I know why most of you choose the short hair for your OC's
Hehehe nice hmm... opening Lol this commentator looks like Kaioshin Good to know the rules at the beginning and both of the fighting guys look well done Kato can turn into SSJ? O__o I think I forgot, I know he can be SSJ4 but SSJ?! I also like the perspective on 3rd panel