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DragonBall OC T Cronicles p1 by wLadyB91 DragonBall OC T Cronicles p1 by wLadyB91
:dance: DRAGONBALL OC TOURNAMENT CRONICLES:dance:

:bulletred: FIGHTS :bulletred:
:star::bulletgreen: KATO vs TURLES :bulletgreen: :star:
:bulletgreen: KIDA vs CELL :bulletgreen:
:bulletgreen: SAJ vs GOKU :bulletgreen:
:bulletgreen: KY vs VEGETTO :bulletgreen:
:bulletgreen: SHIN vs BARDOCK :bulletgreen:
:bulletgreen: LEILA vs VEGETA :bulletgreen:
:bulletgreen: LADY vs BROLY :bulletgreen:
:bulletgreen: SAFARI vs GOGETA SJJ4 :bulletgreen:
:bulletgreen: ALI vs PICCOLO :bulletgreen:
:bulletgreen: LUKAS vs FUTURE TRUNKS :bulletgreen

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DBOC T.Cronicles COVER
DBOC T.Cronicles page 1
DBOC T.Cronicles page 2
DBOC T.Cronicles page 3
DBOC T.Cronicles page 4

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Here we have the begining of the tournament and the first fight between Kato ( ~KnightShadow01 ) and Turles.We already know who is winner but you guys will see at the end of this fight ^^.hope you guys like the first page :XD: still more to come...:P
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:shakefist::bulletpink: ALL 10 ( OC's ) SLOTS are ALREADY TAKEN WE DON'T ACCEPT ANY OC's..so please don't ASK if we can add your oc there :bulletpink::shakefist:
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Art by =wLadyBrunEta and *ShinTheDragonFighter
DBOC Tournament Cronicles =wLadyBrunEta and *ShinTheDragonFighter
DBZ © Akira Toriyama
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:iconkasefubu:
kasefubu Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2010  Student Artist
woaw this is radical keep up the cool awesome job!!!oh and rock on!!
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:iconwladyb91:
wLadyB91 Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much ^^ :D
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:iconkasefubu:
kasefubu Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2010  Student Artist
your welcome :handshake:
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BlazingBarrager Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Well this series should be very interesting.

You might want to work on the spelling/spacing though. It can be very difficult to read sometimes even if you have punctuation.
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:iconwladyb91:
wLadyB91 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^^; hehe sorry:XD: i'll try that :XD: ^^ thankies for the advice :XD: :P ^^ hope you enjoy our comic :D
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BlazingBarrager Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome, and I probably will. Who knows? Maybe I can get my girl Sapha in the next one. ;p
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Diamond-Rainbow Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
lol wow this looks amazing :D oh boy Turles or Kato O_O :O Then again I think Kato deserved to win cuz Turles kept insulting him lol :XD:
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wLadyB91 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:rofl: hahahah :XD: ahh Turles is a proud sayian what you want :XD:
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Diamond-Rainbow Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol so true :D what is it with these saiyan guys and their pride :rofl: Then again Ai is quite stubborn even though she's only half saiyan :XD: That's only when men call her weak or call girls weak in general though lol :D Whatever men can do girls can do better muhaha! ;)
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:iconwladyb91:
wLadyB91 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:rofl: i donno what's with saiyan girls and :XD: all beeing mean:lmao: :XD: well say Rach weeeelll said :XD:
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MissMinority Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2010
*gets popcorn ready*
FIGHT FIGHT FIGHT! :XD:
Looks awesome! =D
oh this should be an exciting battle =D
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:iconwladyb91:
wLadyB91 Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:XD: lol gimme some of that pop will ya:XD:
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MissMinority Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2010
*throws popcorn* CATCH!!! :XD:
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:iconwladyb91:
wLadyB91 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:rofl: thnx :XD:
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:iconmissminority:
MissMinority Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2010
no problem =P
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TwoGuardianAngels Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2010
Go go go goooooooooooooooooooo Kato XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD
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:iconwladyb91:
wLadyB91 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol :XD: :XD: cheering for Kato :XD:
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TwoGuardianAngels Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2010
Yes, I don't want Turles to win >.<
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:iconwladyb91:
wLadyB91 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:XD: lol why??
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TwoGuardianAngels Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2010
Because he's too proud XD
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:iconstrefe:
Strefe Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
*Squeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!* OMYGAWD!! The first page!! It looks FANTASTIC!!
But I can spot two spelling mistakes :XD:

Aplause: Applause

"...if anyone one of you two falls down FORM...": From

And 'I's have to be capitals! :D

Anyways, I'm barracking for Turles but mainly cause I have no idea who Kato is! I can't wait to see who wins!! :D This is so cool!! The drawings look GREAT!!! :heart:
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wLadyB91 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lawl:XD: :rofl: thank you :XD: don't worry i fixed the mistakes:XD:..and i forgot to fix the I aahh damn it :XD: :rofl:..Kato is ~KnightShadow01's oc :XD: he's actuall Lady's apprentice annnd in real life :XD: ~KnightShadow01 is my apprentice:XD:
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Strefe Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
So I see. :D Good job.

I had a look. Nice OC's! Does Lady beat Kato up often? :rofl:
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Strefe Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh yeah, there are also a few other mistakes that I missed first time around but let me know if you care to hear about them so I don't end up as an unwanted spell checker. I don't want to be annoying. :D
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:iconwladyb91:
wLadyB91 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:XD: TELL so i can fix'em :XD:
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:iconstrefe:
Strefe Featured By Owner Jul 16, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Very well then! :D

1st Box:

You may want to consider writing 'tournament' with a capital 'T' seeing as it's the name of something important. Correction: 'Tournament'

When finishing a sentence, there always needs to be a space after the punctuation mark. Corrections: "...today. Now...", "...contestants. The..." and "...Turles. Remember..."

The phrase: "The fight will be between Kato verses Turles" doesn't make much sense to me. I would recommend: "The fight will be Kato verses Turles" or "The fight will be between Kato and Turles." This is only a suggestion.

"...the rules if anyone" Correction: "...the rules are: if anyone..."

"...falls down from the ring.get's killed..." Correction: "...falls from the ring, gets killed..."

The phrase: "...killed or KO the opponent win." doesn't make much sense to me. I would recommend: "...killed or there is a KO then their opponent will win!" This is a very strong suggestion.

If my corrections are satisfactory, would you like me to continue? :D
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:iconwladyb91:
wLadyB91 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
O_O ohhew i have loooots of mistakes:XD: DAMN IT:rofl:
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:iconstrefe:
Strefe Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Well... Yeah... :blush: Sorry. Would you like me to keep spell checking?
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:iconwladyb91:
wLadyB91 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yes :XD:
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:iconstrefe:
Strefe Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Since it was too annoying to do all my corrections like I just did, I'll just give them to you and let you see for yourself. :D

2nd Box: "Killing, huh? Hmmm... I think I'm gonna love this fight... Finally I can prove to Sensei that her training sessions weren't in vain..."

3rd Box: "Okay, lets see what this guy can do first. Then I'll get a bit more serious..."

4th Box: "You've gotta be kidding me! I'm fighting you? A half-breed saiyan! Don't worry, kid. I won't harm you... too bad!"
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Weasley-Detectives Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010  Hobbyist
This is fantastic! Oh, I wish I'd known about this tournament - would love to have joined in. Ah well, maybe I'll draw Saku selling hotdogs to the spectators. XDDD
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wLadyB91 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LMFAO!!!:XD: Saku selling hotdogs:rofl: xD lmao and Jeice cheering:rofl: hahahahaha lol :XD: ^^; i did a journal :XD: the first ones who comented first :XD: they got in:XD: the ' DBOC Tournament Cronicles' :XD: comic:XD: hehehe ^^
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freeza-frost Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i who to cheer. GOOOO KATO!! beat that smarmy jerk!
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:iconwladyb91:
wLadyB91 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:XD: LOL :rofl:
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freeza-frost Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:)
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ssjthug Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010
hmmmmm i got 20 on TURLES :XD:
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:iconwladyb91:
wLadyB91 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:rofl: oke :XD: if you wish :XD:
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ssjthug Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010
:rofl: :D
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:iconfreeza-frost:
freeza-frost Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
hope it ends in a draw! :D love em all!
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:iconwladyb91:
wLadyB91 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:XD: it won't end a draw it can't end :XD: as a draw:XD:
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freeza-frost Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lol. ok. not sure who to cheer for then.
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Leila490 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010
:eager::eager::eager: first round :woohoo: yay! Go Kato :icononicheer:... what's Turles holding in his right hand? Is this a fruit from Tree of Might? Hey, that's cheating :shakefist:
this page looks absolutely fantastic :heart:___:heart: I'm so excited (guess I said that before... who cares :shrug: ) oh, I just can't wait when Leila will be fighting :eager::eager::eager:

stunning :tighthug: we are waiting for more =D
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wLadyB91 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:XD: LAWL :rofl: cheering for Kato :XD: :rofl: yes is a fruit from the tree of might:XD: and no is not cheating :XD: :XD: thank you hunnie ^^ :XD: hehehe i see that your really excited about it:XD: lawl:XD:
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Leila490 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010
well, I hope that Kato will win even if Turles eat that fruit... I know, I know... chosen random ;p... YES! I'm really excited :eager::eager::eager: coz I think it was really a great idea with the Tournament
I'm working now on Leila's SSJ form but I got stucked... now I know why most of you choose the short hair for your OC's :lmao:
:XD::XD::XD:
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wLadyB91 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:icondragontail3: lawl:giggle:XD: see :XD: short hair makes all easy:XD: hahahaha :XD:
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VegetaNiko Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010
Nice one :)
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Sajren91 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hehehe nice hmm... opening :XD: Lol this commentator looks like Kaioshin :D Good to know the rules at the beginning and both of the fighting guys look well done ;P
Kato can turn into SSJ? O__o I think I forgot, I know he can be SSJ4 but SSJ?! :lmao:
I also like the perspective on 3rd panel ;)
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wLadyB91 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:XD: argh it's just a random dude that looks like him:XD: is not him:XD::rofl:...well i donno i have to ask ' furry' if he can :XD: :rofl: thankies ^^ :XD: well it will be a good fight :XD: i'm doing the page 2 right now:lmao:
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Sajren91 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahaaa now everything is clear but you can write it in your description.... ok bad idea, almost no one will read it :lmao:
Hehe better furry than furry majin... etc. etc. :XD:
c...cool!! Will be today?! :la:
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wLadyB91 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
exactly if i write there nobody reads it ._. :rofl: :lmao: LOOOOOOOOOL FURRY MAJIN DANGLY PARTS :lmao:..well err i think yes :XD: cuz it's missing only one pannel :XD: the pressure tool aaaaaand:XD: the text and done:XD:
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